Thursday, 20 March 2014

Adding detail to my story




I am learning to add detail to my story like What,Why,Where,Who,When,How.  I use It In my story to make It more interesting.  For example, I said we did 2 hours of badminton in my story.  I told the reader how long we played badminton for.  It is tricky to remember full stops.  I am proud of remembering to use capital letters.  Next I want to work hard at remembering to use full stops.

Thursday, 6 March 2014

Welcome to Darren's blog

My name is Darren.  I am In room 18.  I am in year 3.  My teacher's name is Ms Baria.  I like playing on Mathletics.  This year I would like to ski.