Persusaive Writing

I am learning to write persuasive writing.  It was tricky when I am discribing the stuff.  I am proud of my persuasion map.

My Holiday

There were birds outside.

Someone is cutting my hair.

Can you guess where am I?

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My Te Tuhi Art - Tapa Cloth

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Adding detail to my story

I am learning to add detail to my story like What,Why,Where,Who,When,How.  I use It In my story to make It more interesting.  For example, I said we did 2 hours of badminton in my story.  I told the reader how long we played badminton for.  It is tricky to remember full stops.  I am proud of remembering to use capital letters.  Next I want to work hard at remembering to use full stops.

Summarising

Welcome to Darren's blog

My name is Darren.  I am In room 18.  I am in year 3.  My teacher's name is Ms Baria.  I like playing on Mathletics.  This year I would like to ski.