Thursday, 5 June 2014

Making Connections

I read Great Big spelling Problems.  I am learning to make connections.  I made a connection with Simon.  It was tricky to think of something that was different between me and Simon.  I am proud of thinking of a good connection.  Next I would like to make connections with a character from a movie I like.




Friday, 23 May 2014

Persusaive Writing

I am learning to write persuasive writing.  It was tricky when I am discribing the stuff.  I am proud of my persuasion map.

Monday, 5 May 2014

My Holiday


There were birds outside.
Someone is cutting my hair.
Can you guess where am I?

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Thursday, 20 March 2014

Adding detail to my story




I am learning to add detail to my story like What,Why,Where,Who,When,How.  I use It In my story to make It more interesting.  For example, I said we did 2 hours of badminton in my story.  I told the reader how long we played badminton for.  It is tricky to remember full stops.  I am proud of remembering to use capital letters.  Next I want to work hard at remembering to use full stops.